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I'm thinking about the grass displacement, for the next work, 3d grass maybe. Thanks!

Well done....a nice render....but i think a little lighting contrast could do a great help.....the grass looks fine in smaller view - but when i see it in the zoomed in view - it's like thousands of spikes....displacement issue man.....should use Vray FUR or Autograss or any 3d Grass staffs. I took the liberty of post processing the lighting a little.....hope you won't mind...:).....just to show you the point.....:D [ATTACH=CONFIG]39724[/ATTACH] Still it's a really awesome work for a first time exterior render......BRAVO!

architectural presentation is good,its well presented....the client will not say, your landscape presentation is not good...or the background is not good..

i know it represents stacked stone but it still seems stretched to me.

its called stacked stone and it looks like that.

We're so focused on the trees that we forget there's a forest. Forget about displacement and leaves, focus on the fundamentals like composition, balance etc. For starter, you should not crop the roof., you should have a focal point,etc . your technique's fine.

I agree about the grass. And I don't like the small leaves near the pool. Otherwise you have done a very good image.

its called stacked stone and it looks like that.

Good lighting. -The stone wall could be better , stones seems squashed. -Is grass displacement ? If it is , modelled grass would be better.

Good lighting. -The stone wall could be better , stones seems squashed. -Is grass displacement ? If it is , modelled grass would be better.

Thanks a lot! Working hard.

Very good image.. especially for a first. Congrats.