Yale Art Gallery
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Cecile Yael Avital
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Thanks mr.Kad!
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Cecile Yael Avital
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I am using daylight system with photographic exposure, how do I sharpen the shadows? I think I am missing something there.
Thanks.
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Kadri Tahir
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i think everyone has said it already, but is is a little dark.
i dont think that is the main problem tho, (not saying there is a big problem)
the building looks great and photoreal,
altho the trees and back street look lo-poly.
overall great job :)
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Jonathan Sanchez
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Much better Cecile. Only thing now is the shadows are too soft for the time of day. The Architecture is being muffled by the shadows... a stronger sun and tweaking lighting composition a bit so that the bldg is not so "shadowy" would help a lot!
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Cecile Yael Avital
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Thank you for your replies, (I heard the cry from Jonathan too :)
I took it back to Photoshop, hope you'll like it better.
Cecile.
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Jonathan Sanchez
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Cecile.. image is also very dark. It's crying for some light!
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Cecile Yael Avital
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Thank you Robert,
I like this building very much, I have modeled the rest of it too, I am currently working on a view from York St.
I agree with the comments about the contrast and sharpness, I'll take care of this.
Cecile.
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Cecile Yael Avital
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Thank you MrCad!
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Robert Costello
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One of my favorite buildings-I have been there and walked past this
view many times--
I think if you're in NH you should take some pics of this view or take some
time to watch the light---
i agree, brightness and contrast and some overall sharpness--
maybe adding the digital message with a little glow
or 1 solitary human figure
or just a slight bit more detail or darkenss between
the the two trees where you can see down chapel st-
it looks really good though- do you have the rest of the building modeled?
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Meher Thakker
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The scene needs a little bit of contrast..but nice work overall !!