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This is great work, very realistic, but i am surprised you haven´t mentioned Peter Guthrie´s reference since it´s so very much alike is Sail house work project here: http://www.peterguthrie.net/visualisation/sail/ No? Great job anyway. As a con I would just had a bit of contrast maybe. Cheers

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Image looking great! I have to ask, what did u use to create the grass? Itoo Forest? Cheers Derek

Here is an updated image with re-done vegetation. I used probability maps extensively with the terrain to give a more diverse feel. What could I add to the environment to make it more interesting? Tom. www.FourDimensions.co.uk

Brian Campbell You did a great job in photoshop. And also I would like to thank you for your advice and sharing your knowledge. I benefited from your comment. constructive argument. I would send you a buck if I could. :D Anyway, what is your rate per hour? AB

Thanks for your help, these are things that I know but I'm one of those people who just fails to do these things of the top of their head! Thanks so much for the pointer it's just opened up a whole load of interesting options. Thanks alot! Tom www.FourDimensions.co.uk

There are several things that can be done to improve an image. I would look to Photography, and the concepts used to enhance a photo. Such as: Rule of thrids ( ) Originally your building was set in the dead center of the image, where as if you align importent features that the viewer should pay attention to along a thrid line, it will help increase the interest of the over all image. or Fibnocci Composition ( ) another concept of aligning objects within your frame to increase interest. Color Theory - Helps direct the viewers eye to a certain feature or area that the architect/client wants to convey strongly. Right now your rendering has a wash of red over the entire image, use cool/warm gradients to help look into and scan across the image. Entourage - Using people to look at, point towards or walk towards/to will also help direct the viewers eye Thats a decent start, basic and fundamental but these principles will help any image improve interest. Cheers

[ATTACH=CONFIG]43899[/ATTACH] Its a good rendering, with some good potential. With some curve love, and some adjustment on compostition you'd be pretty set. I took a couple minutes and applied said things...

What would you suggest on the composition side of things? Thats sadly my week spot!

[ATTACH=CONFIG]43899[/ATTACH] Its a good rendering, with some good potential. With some curve love, and some adjustment on compostition you'd be pretty set. I took a couple minutes and applied said things...

Thanks for all the pointers so far guys, I'm at my desk working away on it (rendering as I type) - First of, yes I'll definitely add more to the interior... I'm so early on in the project I haven't really had much time on that but that's on the to-do list. I did add some contrast with the curve but it just seemed to take away more than it added. However! I didnt think at all to adjust the red curve. I'll give that a go next time around. And yes, the long dry grass isnt great at all, I totally agree with you. I'm going to re-model that all to get a much more realistic resuly, hopefully then it'll actually start contributing to the image! Thanks so far guys! Really helpful! Tom www.FourDimensions.co.uk - Freelance artist for hire.

Love the lighting and the grass/sand. Well done. The only thing I think detracts from this image is that brown grass on the right side of the image. The green color on the longer green grass clumps look a little over saturated too, but that could just be my bad eyes. Good Job Tom.

Curve adjustments could be done on the Luminosity,or possibly a gamma correction (lacks contrast), as well a curve adjustment specifically within the red channel.

The render is extremely realistic. Ground work is more than perfect. No Critic I guess. But only issue is "the interior has less furniture"