Floorplan 2D
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Vance Lazar
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Talens,
To respond to your reply, my criticism is more in line with the Architecture and space planning shown rather than your technique on a rendered floor plan.
I did provide criticism about your "rendering technique's." Again, I personally feel the mix of sketchy beds and hard linework doesnt work well together. Ie, if you are going to color furniture, color ALL furniture. The beds specifically look out of place bc they are not colored. The flooring pattern doesnt represent any finish very well. If it is to represent some kind of wood flooring which is where I think you were going, have longer plank boards that represent that. The square pattern within the floor pattern looks confusing.
I guess my biggest problem with your post is this: It doesnt seem like you posted for comments but rather advertisement for business. Also, if this is the case, you would choose a better floor plan (if you didnt create it.) And since you provide your services "world wide" you would have that oppurtinity to show the community a plan that is functional to showcase your work. It makes you look bad if this is the type of Architects you work with.
On that same note. YOU opened yourself up for criticism when you type HIGH QUALITY when honestly its not that High Quality. That is not to say, this is your best work or you cant produce better work.
Im sorry if I am coming off rude. It was and is not my intent to be mean, just very honest. Good luck and wish you much success.